Good baseline. Give some thought to the analytics around the data given the volume

Very energetic pitch; not clear what the output is and hence UI/UX

Talked very fast, great idea but it is a lack of mention of how much time/money can be saved with this idea. Why is it the best idea?

Challenges 1&3 Need to consider the audience diversity. Expand focus on data and analytics. Good start; needs more focus to enhance clarity.